Thursday, February 05, 2009

Shallow


I conquered you
within your chosen parameters
as requested
I guess tonight
I left spontaneity
in my other purse
don't worry
our love will last forever
and a day
like asbestos

2 comments:

Marius Surleac said...

I like the simplicity of this poem but also the opposite manner of showing the meaning of things, different than the normal path chosen by many of us. Is like going to war with the bare hands, but having a secret card kept in the sleeve

Corina said...

Yes Marius! It's the secret in the sleeve...I also wanted to give a taste of own medicine, the one that says: Be careful what you wish for!...

so glad you were here!:)